Cross Country

Last Friday I ran in the cross country.

Before the cross country I felt really nervous.

After the cross country I felt like this was easy to do.

My goal was to not come last and I completed it.

I am proud that I Didn't stop in the race.

what helped me keep going was my goal.

Cross country

Speeeeech Time

Before my speech I felt really nervous because I thought that I might forget whats written on my cue cards like last time I had to skip some cue cards out.
After my speech I felt really sad because I knew nearly all of my speech but I still didnt do any eye cotact because I just didnt want to look at the audience staring at me and I didnt do jestures for no reason.
Something I did well was speaking clearly and I spoke louder than last time.
My goal was to do eye contact but I failed to complete my goal so next year when its speech time this will be my goal.
Next time I want to workn on Eye contact and to speak a bit louder.

Naritive writing

This term for writing we have been doing narrative writing. In a good narrative story there is a hook in sentence, time and place a problem a solution a interesting ending and how the characters are like and a title .

My stories title is Swedan tree because Swedan tree is really special in my story. My stories hook in sentence is keep digging I said to my friend. we're nearly there. My stories time and place is midday on top of tree on ship under tree on Great Barrier island in ocean on land. My stories characters are me, ugly piarates my friend Elizabeth who is a nice girl and Alisha who is really brave and strong. My stories problem is that me and my two friends get locked on the pirates ship by the pirates. My stories solution is that the pirates get under attack by an another group of pirates and one of their pirate was coming to check if there was a pirate where we were locked up. I saw a knife so I picked it up and I opened the ropes. We had three life jackets and so we put them on. Splaashhhhhhh we jumped into the sea and swam across to Great Barrier island. My stories interesting ending is Alisha your great. Thanks for doing all the digging said Elizabeth. I love Swedan tree, it's the best tree i've ever seen said Sabrina. I think we should go home now. we now got all the treasure and i,m tired now. lets go home now said Alisha. These were my main parts of my story.

I like narrative writing because you can make your own made up story.

Next time when I write a Narrative story I will include lots of adjectives and similes.