Sunday, 2 September 2012

adding detail

For writing we have been learning to make boring sentenses into really intresting sentenses by adding detail। We had to change I ate breakfast into a intresting sentense । This is my version of it।

Yesterday sunny morning I ate deliocios breakfast at 6 o clock। I ate breakfast so early because I had to go to work at 7 o clock। For breakfast I ate cluster crisp and berry yoghurt with meusli। It was deliocios।
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